I am a 14 year old teenager who loves to write with an aim to make a profession out of writing instead of torturing the brain with formulas and equations
Monday, May 16, 2011
Another day part 3
Mohit stared unwillingly at the scene unfolding in the bank. But lying down over there was of no use as far as he was concerned for the people, he had been in this situation before and knew to cope with the horrid feeling.
His mind submerged into calculating the no. of robbers in the bank as he remember 4 of them walking up to the top floors, perhaps two of them in charge for a floor and 3 of them brats in the floor where he was currently at.
''7 robbers to take down. I wish these people would start believing in themselves.'' he said as his eyes moved towards the poor innocent people, some of them shedding tears.
He analyzed everything that was lying around him. Something suitable, something to be used as a weapon. Aha! A paper cutter blade!
''I just have to find the right timing'' thought Mohit. But the issue now bothering him was it was lying in front of a young lad who had been lying down.
Mohit made all sorts of sounds and noises to alert the lad and finall.y caught his attention and moved his eyes over the blade signaling him to pass it.The lad caught the right timing and fought himself to take risk pushing the blade on the tile as it came sliding towards Mohit.
Mohit grabbed and hid it skilfully for he had to wait for the moment. Timing is an essence of life, it is up to us to utilize it. Mohit seized the moment as the two robbers where out of his range and slowly crept up to the robber and strangled him warning him fiercely with a knife. Everything happened so soon as the people in the room saw the spirit of Mohit and immediately dragged the robber's leg and hid him shutting his mouth with a handkerchief.
''One freak down. I get a gun out of it.'' thought Mohit looking at the weapon.
The two robbers were back and as they saw Mohit with a gun, they immediately a seized a woman by her hand and smirked at him. Just as this happened, there came a huge slam as a robber fell on his knees. The very old man who Mohit had met a few minutes ago had hit the robber hard on the head with a keyboard. The other robber with the help of his gun thrust it into the old man's stomach as people came out of nowhere holding captive of those two robbers.
Mohit had awakened the tiger in these guys.
~IN THE FIRST FLOOR~ :: The first floor seemed quite relaxing as it was air conditioned. The two robbers in this floor could hear some huge raucous going downstairs and one went to check it.
As he was coolly descending the stairs, a group of people from nowhere caught hold of his legs and dragged him on the stairway as the robber screamed on the top of his voice to alert his companion.
''What's that noise!?'' His companion shrieked. ''Somebody has to be in charge of this floor, I can't leave it.'' he thought and walked to the stairway and shouted to his fellows at the 2nd floor. ''Lots of noise in the ground floor, Rohit went to inspect it and never returned!''
''I am sending one downstairs'' came the reply and as a robber from the 2nd floor descended was making his way to the ground floor, he didn't catch any sight of the robber in charge of the 1st floor . ''Strange'' he remarked as the people were yet lying down scared, unaware of the fact that Mohit and his men were lying just in front of him. Surprise attack.
~IN THE SECOND FLOOR~::
''Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!!!!'' came an ear deafening sound in the 1st floor. This 2nd floor rat was all alone and he sensed it.
''Whoever it is! You can not lay hands upon me.'' he said grabbing a youngster by his collar. ''I warn you! This kid will die, I warn you! Whoever is making this noise! I warn you again!'' he said. This one was all shook up but the people there were yet lying down at the sight of the ominous gun the robber was clutching.
After a while came a police siren growing louder and louder as it was approaching the bank. This guy was in trouble.
To be continued..
- Rahul Kulkarni
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This is too good! :D
ReplyDeleteLooks like some movie scene. :P
Waiting for the next post. :)
AMAZING BRO!!!
ReplyDeleteawesome work there, I enjoyed reading it and you have worked on the plot so well :)
Keep up the good work :D
nice plot kid :P
ReplyDeletewaiting for next part :P